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"Are you okay, sweetie?" Mrs. Jones asked, "Do you want to talk about it?"

"No ma'am…"

You bowed your head. You had been watching Alfred chop wood outside the window. She couldn't meet Mrs. Jones's eyes. How on earth do you go about telling another woman you were just ogling her son? It wouldn't go over well. You were starting to think deeply about your own family. Alfred's was tighter knit than yours. The woman in front you could be pushy but she wasn't demanding. Mrs. Jones expected honesty and hard work, but respected distance and personal issues. She hadn't forced you to talk at all that summer but she had put you and Alfred's other friends to work on the farm, probably taking advantage of having extra hands.

"I think… I'll go help Alfred chop some firewood…" you said evasively.

You walked out the door without another word. Alfred grinned and waved you over the moment he saw you. There was a second axe sitting by a stump at his side. You grabbed the second axe. You walked over to a fine stone. There was a pile of wood that needed to be chopped beside the stone. You grabbed one and set it up. You brought the axe up and brought it down quickly, evenly splitting the wood in half. You picked up another and repeated your actions. You didn't say a word to Alfred, notifying him that you were in deep thought.

You didn't notice Elizaveta giggling over Alfred. You didn't notice the way Alfred's muscles coiled, flexed, and rippled. You were oblivious to the way he brought his arms up, which made all of his muscles tighten, he swung and wood split. You were non-observant of the way the morning sun gave Alfred's muscles a sort of glow since he was coated in a fine layer of sweat. Alfred didn't notice he had an audience building up. Mrs. Jones watched from the window. The woman rolled her eyes and went back to rolling out the dough for her pie.

"I swear they're going to drown in their angst," Mrs. Jones muttered, "No-one-understand-what-I'm-going-through mood swings, as if I haven't been there. __________ acts as if Alfred doesn't feel the same…"
Come on fans, you know you want to see him shirtless...

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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
not just shirtless. Shirtless chopping wood. Hot dang. And then he'll toss his hair out of his eyes and...oh gosh *squeals, flails, and collapses*
Verdict: Dead.
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Hmmm... Alfred F. Jones, you are here today for murder charges against sarpndo, how do you plead?

:iconhawtamerica2plz::iconsaysplz:Guilty your honor.
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
*runs up crying* Don't incarcerate him, your honor! He didn't do anything! He's just too sexy for words!
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sasami227 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sasami227 dies. Cause of death: Shirtless America and fangirling.
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Opps... Perhaps I should have put a warning. May cause nosebleeds and fangirling deaths...
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Shadeedyfan247 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
XD awesome
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Yeah, a shirtless America sure is!
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Shadeedyfan247 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
XD yeah
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Darkest-Crystal72 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
DAYUM RIGHT I WANNA SEE HIM SHIRTLESS.
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Who doesn't?
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AnimeLOVERSyeah Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg...I WANT TO SEE HIM SHIRTLESS!!!!! * nosebleeds a fricken ocean*

Continue this please!!
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:iconkita-kudai:
kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
I'm sure there's fanart out there somewhere.

We'll see about a continuation. No promises though.
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AnimeLOVERSyeah Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really want to see one!!! I can just imagine my self right now...:iconspainapprovedplz:
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Yurri1234 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist
Continue this~! PLEASE!~
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:iconkita-kudai:
kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
We'll have to wait and see
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Yurri1234 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist
Nooo~
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
I just have to wait until my college finals are over. Then I might have more time.
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Yurri1234 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist
YAY~ Do good on your finals! ^^
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lea777666 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
I just had a rainbow nosebleed...
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Make sure to use tissues then.
:icontissuesplz:
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lea777666 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Thank You... *uses tissues*
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ExSakura-Lit Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw damn, now my shirtless fetish is acting up! :icontwitchplz:
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
You know you don't really mind all that much...
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ExSakura-Lit Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I know I don't :iconnosebleedingplz:
Shirtlessness...
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DreamFutureAis Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You can't just end it here. You can't. I'm dying. Oh my gosh.


:iconsquee-loveplz: :iconiloveyouplz: :iconsqueeeeplz:


My emotions are exploding.
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:iconkita-kudai:
kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Emotions or fangirling? (I'm just teasing friend) We'll have to wait and see about a sequel. I might not get to it.
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DreamFutureAis Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Everything. :XD:

That's fine! ^^; If you do make one though, that would be really awesome! ^^
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Someday I can. I just have college finals creeping up on me.
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DreamFutureAis Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That doesn't sound fun! :c Good luck on them! ^^
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randomgirlhrl Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Will you please continue this please
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
We'll see. I have quite a bit I have to do
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randomgirlhrl Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Yeah you have to
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solonaxdawn Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Dawww, shy love. XD I think this one deserves a sequel! :D
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Shy love is always the cutest kind.
We'll see. I can't make promises.
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solonaxdawn Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww, you can't leave us hanging like that! XP I understand though, college and stuff, right?
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Exactly. Finals are right around the corner.
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solonaxdawn Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Ick, finals. :bleh: Totally understandable.
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MoHarri Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
What America Fan doesn't want to see him Shirtless ;P personally I would take him Shirtless any day XD
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Shirtless, clothed... Is there really that big of a difference? I wouldn't mind him either way!
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MoHarri Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student General Artist
I can't disagree with you there. I'm sure if any of my top 5 Hetalia guys showed up shirt on or shirt off I would instantly swoon. reason they are the top 5
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CrushGoddess Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
*looks away to cough phlegm(this is why i hate getting sick)* *grabs tissue that is always handy* *looks up at you* PLease, continue. *does not notice the story has ended* *nosebleeds a waterfall*
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
:icontissuesplz: <--- For you
I can't make any promises on a second.
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CrushGoddess Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
i dont mind. *takes tissue* thanks for the tissue though.

now....i have to wipe that blood up.....
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Mauvaiseloup Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
N'aw, short and sweet. Just perfect!
Yeah, I suppose that I would like to see a shirtless America... :D
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Mauvaiseloup Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Oops, sorry; I forgot to add,
Mrs. Jones cracks me up! I love her character, even though she was barely there. She's awesome!
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
All of the Hetalia guys would look good shirtless.

Mrs. Jones was actually based off my own mom. She does stuff like that... I'm glad you liked her!
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ArtisticallyLiterate Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yes, yes we do.
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kita-kudai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
:iconyayamericaplz:
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ArtisticallyLiterate Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Lol.
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MamaMrL789 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alfred shirtless....:iconnosebleedplz:
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